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"as the rain falls down
i wish it would stop
i wanna see the sun
not the dark blue sky
i wanna see the sun"


art trade with :iconmnm3456::)
tried out my old coloring style mixed in with my new one:D
hope you like

brushes used
ref is from google
comments are loved :heart: beside for hate comments
hope you like <3

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:iconohhperttylights:
let see.. where should i start?

lets start with the good points of this;
your faces and paws are looking ALOT better, your paws dont look so over sized as they did
mixing your "old" and your "new" style together was a nice idea, turned out very nice ;)
the rain also looks very good, but maybe add a little more behind the wolf?
like make a layer under it and re draw your rain or something? i dont know how layers work to well :P

now ill go on to things you may want to change or fix up
the face, its getting better but it still just doesnt look right; same with the paws, getting better but still doesnt look 'right'
the pose is very good, but the back legs look a bit off to me
you may want to fix the rain like i said before
for the sky; maybe add some more stars, not the same size, you know what i mean right?

well i think thats all, and the chain around the neck is looking good too
keep up the great work:heart:
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Wow this is really nice! :D

i like this style ^^

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Wow! one of your best!

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ZOMG This is so cool!!

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cool! looks nice :)

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Looks great!! :D The rain looks really nice ^^ I love the style, and the coloring rocks

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thank you^^

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thank you:)

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thankyou

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thankyou^^

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