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"What will you find at night?
you'll never know till you go out
out of your safe homes
and out into the darkness
with fear all around you
as you walked out of your safe home
looking around trying to see
but all you see is darkness
then as you start to see owls and bats fly around the sky
a black cat with green glowing eyes sitting in a tree
a sad wolf howl- then it got cut off
with a bang and a bark
you'll start to run
away, away from the sounds
and the darkness of the night
how you wished you have started inside
as the foot steps walked closer
the barking of dogs
and the bangs of guns shooting the owls bats wolves and any other animal out at night
the night is filled with fear
why didnt you stay inside?
why?
why?
then; it happen
what you feared the most
death
your body fell to the ground
breathing your last breath
as you hit the cold ground
and looked at the sun rising over the hills; over the trees
over everything you feared
but it was to late
your eyes started to close
as you lay there
dying
the foot steps walked closer to you
picked you up
and you fell into a deep sleep
as the sun went up
into the dark sky
filled with your fears
you died there and then
with nothing else
the darkness took over you even with the rising sun
nothing else
was the sun ever rising?
how would you know
you died right there and then in the darkness
of the night
you shouldnt have went out
when it was so dark
with all your fears around you
you died"
-me

adopted this little guy from the one who lets me hugs him not and im not going to let him forget that; :iconohhperttylights::hug:

the story thing up there is about a raccoon who went out at night..
sorry its kinda sad..

if you couldnt tell, but the animal is a raccoon
... well its now a raccoon bear fox:XD:
his name is Gun-Shot:heart:

brushes used
ref is from google

comments are loved :heart: beside for hate comments
hope you like <3

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do not take, use, or edit in anyway, or anything of that like

Critiques


:iconyupik:
I think it looks pretty good. I really like the background


Here's a little line art tip - When you're using darker shades of colors then thin lines aren't really a good idea. Try a thicker brush.

The raccoons muzzle looks a little oddly shaped. Raccoons muzzles aren't that long. In fact they're pretty short. However I do think you got the ears down. They should be a tad smaller but they look fine.

Also, raccoons legs aren't thick like a dogs. They're pretty narrow. The body should also be a little more defined, seems just like an oval.

But great drawing, love to see wolf-loving deviants trying out at different animals (: !
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fanatic

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..in bed


"I like the smell of berp " Little man big mouth
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thanks:)

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:iconapachethedragon:
np

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..in bed


"I like the smell of berp " Little man big mouth
:iconice-or-fire:
thank you!

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This is how life works: [link]
:eye: click the eye
ANIMAL artist, not just a WOLF artist
:iconohhperttylights:
omg this turned out great from that WIP i saw <3
your backgrounds are really getting better and the story is nice and sad..
i told you it would come out great didnt i?

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...and that's the reason why you fail"


=ice-or-fire gave me the subbie :heart:
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thank you bro

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ANIMAL artist, not just a WOLF artist
:iconicevampyr:
I like the background, pose and the colours you've used, your artworks are getting better and better. ^^

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:iconatsuookami:
What a cutie :heart:

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